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IELTS Essay Writing Ep. 8

IELTS Essay Writing (Task Two). 

This is the final lesson for IELTS Essays Writing

Information

Lesson summary:

Episode: 8

In this lesson, Kru. Jaem introduces "Is this a positive or negative development?" essay question.

Important information:

Miscellaneous

  • Writing must only be submitted by email with your student ID Number to thinkincafekk@gmail.com.

  • Students should download the recommended books.

Essential Points

For an essay that discusses whether a given situation is a positive or negative development, it's important to present a balanced and well-supported argument. 

Grammar Structures:

  1. Introduction:

    • Clearly state your position on whether the development is positive or negative.

    • Provide a brief overview of the main points you will discuss.

    Example: "The proliferation of social media in recent years is undoubtedly a significant development, but whether it is a positive or negative one is a topic of ongoing debate."

  2. Body Paragraphs:

    • Topic Sentences:

      • Clearly express whether the specific aspects you're discussing are positive or negative.

    • Supporting Details:

      • Use a variety of sentence structures to present specific details and examples.

    • Comparisons and Contrasts:

      • Employ comparative structures to highlight differences and similarities.

    Example: "On the positive side, social media has facilitated global communication and connectivity. However, the negative impact on mental health, particularly among younger generations, cannot be ignored."

  3. Counterarguments:

    • Address potential counterarguments to demonstrate a nuanced understanding.

    • Use phrases like "some argue," "however," or "on the other hand" to introduce counterpoints.

    Example: "While some argue that social media enhances social connections, others contend that it exacerbates feelings of isolation and inadequacy, particularly among individuals prone to social comparison."

  4. Conclusion:

    • Summarize your main points.

    • Restate your position and offer a final thought.

    Example: "In conclusion, while the advent of social media has undeniably brought about positive changes in communication, its negative impact on mental well-being emphasizes the need for a balanced and cautious approach to its use."

Vocabulary:

  1. Expressing Positive Aspects:

    • advantageous, beneficial, positive development, improvement, enhancement.

  2. Expressing Negative Aspects:

    • detrimental, harmful, negative development, drawback, downside.

  3. Indicating Degree:

    • significantly, markedly, substantially, notably.

  4. Presenting Counterarguments:

    • some argue that, however, on the other hand, it is contended that.

  5. Highlighting Similarities and Differences:

    • similarly, likewise, in contrast, on the contrary.

  6. Concluding:

    • in conclusion, overall, to sum up, all things considered.

Sample Sentence:

"While the integration of artificial intelligence in various industries is undeniably a positive development, as it enhances efficiency and productivity, the potential job displacement and ethical concerns associated with its widespread adoption should not be overlooked."

Try this exercise!

Students must now complete the IELTS Foundation Study Skills Writing Task Two chapter by downloading the file below and then submitting your written response to the teacher by email at thinkincafekk@gmail.com with your Student ID Number. There is no deadline - you can complete the activities at anytime during the course.

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