Writing Task Two (Academic and General ) - IELTS Cambridge 20 ( Test 4 ), 2025
Question: Some people believe that curiosity is the key driver of innovation, while others think it is necessity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Innovation has been driven by a range of human motivations, yet there is debate over whether curiosity or necessity plays the greater role. Both perspectives hold merit, but curiosity arguably provides the deeper foundation for long-term progress.
Advocates of necessity argue that urgent problems push people to create solutions. History provides many examples, such as the rapid development of medical treatments during pandemics or the invention of wartime technologies. In these cases, human survival and practical needs have forced breakthroughs that might otherwise have taken decades.
By contrast, curiosity often sparks discovery without immediate demand. Scientific exploration of space, artificial intelligence, or genetic engineering was not initially driven by survival, yet such pursuits have already produced countless applications. Curiosity fuels creativity and allows humans to explore beyond current limitations, ensuring continuous advancement even when necessity is absent.
In my view, both necessity and curiosity are essential, but curiosity is more powerful in the long run. Necessity may produce quick solutions, but curiosity sustains innovation by encouraging people to ask questions and imagine possibilities before problems even exist.
In conclusion, while necessity can accelerate innovation in times of crisis, curiosity remains the ultimate driver of human progress.
Word count: 263
Commentary on the grammar used:
Intro:
"Innovation has been driven by a range of human motivations, yet there is debate over whether curiosity or necessity plays the greater role. Both perspectives hold merit, but curiosity arguably provides the deeper foundation for long-term progress."
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Present perfect passive: "has been driven."
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Balanced contrast with "yet."
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Adverb of stance: "arguably."
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Complex noun phrase: "the deeper foundation for long-term progress."
Body 1:
"Advocates of necessity argue that urgent problems push people to create solutions. History provides many examples, such as the rapid development of medical treatments during pandemics or the invention of wartime technologies. In these cases, human survival and practical needs have forced breakthroughs that might otherwise have taken decades."
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Reporting verb: "argue that."
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Present simple for historical generalisations.
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Modal perfect: "might otherwise have taken."
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Parallel structure in examples.
Body 2:
"By contrast, curiosity often sparks discovery without immediate demand. Scientific exploration of space, artificial intelligence, or genetic engineering was not initially driven by survival, yet such pursuits have already produced countless applications. Curiosity fuels creativity and allows humans to explore beyond current limitations, ensuring continuous advancement even when necessity is absent."
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Contrast marker "By contrast."
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Past passive: "was not initially driven."
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Present perfect: "have already produced."
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Present participle clause: "ensuring continuous advancement..."
Conclusion:
"In my view, both necessity and curiosity are essential, but curiosity is more powerful in the long run. Necessity may produce quick solutions, but curiosity sustains innovation by encouraging people to ask questions and imagine possibilities before problems even exist. In conclusion, while necessity can accelerate innovation in times of crisis, curiosity remains the ultimate driver of human progress."
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Author stance with "In my view."
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Modal "may produce."
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Balanced compound sentence: "Necessity may produce..., but curiosity sustains..."
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Concluding concessive: "while necessity... curiosity remains..."
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Rubrics:
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Task Achievement: Balanced discussion of both views with clear stance in favour of curiosity. Strong supporting examples (medical innovations, wartime technologies, space/AI/genetics). Conclusion fully restates opinion.
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Coherence & Cohesion: Excellent signposting (Advocates of necessity argue…, By contrast, In my view, In conclusion). Clear two-view structure with contrasting paragraphs.
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Lexical Resource: High-level collocations and academic phrasing (urgent problems, immediate demand, countless applications, continuous advancement, ultimate driver of human progress). Variety of stance adverbs (arguably, already).
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Grammar: Sophisticated grammar range — passive + perfect (“has been driven,” “have already produced”), modal perfect (“might otherwise have taken”), concessive subordination (“while necessity can accelerate…”), reduced relative clauses (“subjects requiring practical training”), participle clause (“ensuring continuous advancement…”). Balanced complex–compound sentences with contrast structures.
Score: 9.0
Date: 19 July 2025
Reason:
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Present perfect passive (“has been driven”) → academic objectivity.
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Modal perfect (“might otherwise have taken decades”) → precision in hypothetical history.
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Contrastive subordination → (“By contrast,” “while necessity… curiosity remains”) strengthens coherence.
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Participle clause → “ensuring continuous advancement” compresses information.
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Balanced complex sentences → argumentation appears fluent and academic.
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Formal and abstract vocabulary consistently elevates tone.
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Clear stance markers (“In my view,” “arguably”) without overusing “I think.”